How To Hook & Keep Your Readers
Narrative Hooks & How to create them
My name is Jonathan Miller II. I’m a creative writing coach, bestselling author, professional musician, and entrepreneur. I want to help you reach your goals as an author.
So what’s holding you back?
Maybe you don’t think your writing is good enough. Maybe you don’t think you CAN write. Maybe you’re not writing fast enough. Maybe…life! Kids, unsupportive husband/wife, no time, or maybe you’ve just plain given up.
Well, I’m here to tell you, there’s a solution.
Author Mentorship Program
This program helps…
1) Improve your writing. Based on 20+ years of academic and creative writing expertise, this program will take your current skillset and polish it so you can deliver your story in a way readers will enjoy.
2) Get your motivation back. If you’ve STOPPED writing and can’t figure out why you’re stuck, this program will get you back to doing what you do best and give you the tools to keep yourself going.
3) Finish your book. The #1 reason a writer doesn’t become a successful author is because they never finish! This program will keep you writing and FINISHING your book(s).
4) 1-on-1 guidance. This isn’t the one-time editing and never-hear-from-you-again that you’re used to hearing about. You will have a real person mentoring you with improving your writing style and book.
Let me say that again: you’re going to have mentoring from a best. selling. author. to improve your skills.
Most writers are left to just muddle through it, and their books end up reading like that. You won’t make that mistake. You’ll have a real author giving you real skills that have been proven to work! Writing is an art, you must deliver it with skill. Now, you’ll have those skills.
Meet Real Authors Who Have Done It!
No published book
10 published books
Writing contract with
Hot Tree Publishing
The only difference between you and THEM is they believed in themselves, kept writing, and finished.
They followed their dreams and reached for their calling.
How does it work?
Once you sign up, you’re going to have access to the exclusive Author Mentorship page. There you will receive tools to help improve your writing that you can implement right now (explained below).
On this page, you will also have a link to send in your writing. It doesn’t have to be long, a chapter is fine. All you have to do is share your writing to us. We will review it and provide quality feedback to enhance your writing and show you how to improve. You see, we want to make sure you do the most important step in claiming your career and making a difference - write!
The Author’s Essential
Writing Pilot ($2497 value)
You’ll get this short guide to further help you improve your writing, and who knows, maybe even open up your own business and help others.
Included in this guide:
The Book Launch Success System™ (A value of $997) - What to do after your book is complete so you can have a book that is ready for publication. It also gives you a few strategies that helped me make that first $40K as an author! It won’t be a “get rich quick” scheme, but it will help you achieve the long-term success you need to make this a career.
Essential Writing Tools
Various videos will be made available to you with more being added to give you more writing tools in a concise way you will be able to master in order to keep you improving as an author.
Tools included: Writing the perfect narrative hook, overcoming writer’s block, creating scenes and worldbuilding, and more!
Oveall Value = $3691
Okay, so how much is this?
So, here’s the deal…this is NOT some magical program that’s going to make you a million dollars in a week. In fact, you’re only seeing this because you’ve proven that you’re serious about being an author.
You see, I can only work with people who are serious, who look at the reality of the situation and are not afraid to put in the work. Who understand that they are not perfect but are passionate about being an author and creating an effect on their audience.
This program is about making you the best author possible so you have a chance to do for others what Mr. Goodkind did for me (and, through me, for YOU). Is that fair enough?
Now, usually we charge $2999 annually for this service. After all, you’re learning a skill you’ll be able to implement and use to create a CAREER (possibly more than one) for the rest of your life. But this week, we want to have the highest number of authors we’ve ever had.
Sign Up for The
Author Mentorship Program
Don’t Worry! You’re protected!
We’ve helped over 168 authors write, publish, and start their writing careers. I’ve learned enough to transform any story I get into one that grabs the reader and brings in glowing reviews. If, for whatever reason, you’re not satisfied with the service you receive, I’ll double your refund!
With this program, you’ll be getting a service that people pay tens of thousands for. The difference is that we have the track record to ensure that you’ll be getting mentoring from a real bestselling author who has built careers. What is that worth to you?
Now, we can only work with so many people at a time, so we can only open this up for the next 20 authors who join (if you’re seeing this, there are still slots open). After that, we’ll be closing this program down so we can focus on really giving them the best service possible. So, if you want that to be you, choose your program (monthly or yearly) and click the button below.
Now, we really want to make sure we’re giving our authors the best we have to offer, so we can only take 50 authors IN A YEAR. Afterward, we close down the program until our authors finish and are on their way to making their careers, so don’t miss out!
You don’t want to miss the chance to make REAL change in the world. You could be the one who stops someone’s downward spiral through life. Don’t miss your calling because you didn’t write that life-saving, movement-creating book. Trust me, it really really does happen.
Enrollment opens: June 25, 2019
There are currently: 4 sPots left!
How does this differ
from “normal” editing?
Let me give you some numbers quick:
Line Editing: $1600
Developmental Editing: $3200
(numbers based on pricing for 80K word book.)
That’s just for quality, professional editing, and there’s no guarantee your editors will tell you WHY they made the changes they made – which does you no good. Without understanding why, how are you ever supposed to get better?
If you think that’s high, how much does it cost for a Creative Writing degree? $13K - $60K A YEAR! Are you prepared to do that to learn how to write? And are those professors interested in using your writing style and improving on that? Because even if you attend, they aren’t going to personally mentor YOU based on YOUR writing style, YOUR voice.
Value: $57,600 minimum
4 years of college (on the CHEAPEST end) + Editing
We’re not trying to get you to commit to 4 years of anything (besides doing what you want to do). Those college courses won’t help you deliver your book. We are in the business of making successful authors who reach their goals.
Can I cancel when I need to?
Absolutely! Like we said, we understand that life happens. You can cancel anytime you need to, but our goal is to make it so that you won’t ever feel like you need to.
Who will be my mentor?
It will either be me personally or one of my staff with my company. Don’t worry, I would not choose someone I didn’t trust 100% with my own writing. If I trust them with my babies, I’d trust them with yours.
May I ask about more than just writing?
Sure! Our expertise is in the writing field, but we can advise you on more than just the creating of the book. We’re also a publishing company, so the publishing and marketing of your book is also something we know how to handle.